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The Elm and I
Contributed by
LilMunchkin
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She stands alone, both tall and true the perfect picture of solitude the soul of a woman encased in the bark with limbs that move in a majestic arc alone she faced the storms of life others gave up, but no, not she and there she stands for all to see she's had her share of troubles and woes but she made it through and still she grows like her i too know grief and pain i've faced the wind i've felt the rain and like her too i still stand tall though life may beat me i will not fall it may throw punches i will take a blow but in the end i too, shall grow each storm i weather increases my strength and beneath this skin my soul to thank the elm and i we know what to do we count on ourselves and make it through
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Re: The Elm and I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:10:18 PM AEST (User
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fantastic write. ::applauds:: i liked this, very inspirational. i was a little wary to read this because of the title, but im glad i read it. =] nice style, concept, and power put forth in this. keep it up |
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Re: The Elm and I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:31:56 AM AEST (User
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This was...would have to the best poem I have read, I loved the way it flowed, and the images were........felt so vividly real like I could see the elm swaying in the wind.....tall strong and proud......full of life.
Defienitly one of my favourites.
Awesome poem loved it. |
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