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Beyond this Place
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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looking up to the black sky
i think about all the lies
and i can hear their cries
why didnt they realize
they're gone,no more playing
on the cold hardwood floor
no more watching them sleep
deep down i miss them
(chorus)
i'm beyond this place
would they look me in the face
they're gone beyong this place
they're ;ife is a discrace
we're beyond this place
i use to be able to play
with lil ryan,but now its not the same
i use to be able to play
all them weird whacky games
taylor only 6
ryan only 8 months
they had no life,they have no life
i need to learn some trix
god dam people,why cant they use their heads
they cant even make their own beds
this is to crazy,why they outa be lazy
my neice and nephew gone its like they're dead
maybe its good,maybe its not
i need them,i want them,their
parents are whacked,but i can
improve them,they can be my angels
(chorus)
i'm beyond this place
would they look me in the face
they're gone beyong this place
they're ;ife is a discrace
we're beyond this place
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Re: Beyond this Place
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:06:00 PM AEST
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hey there =] nice to see you pop in every now and again =] double smilies already, hrm i must be in a good mood =] (the dreaded triple smily)
well anyway i liked this one. especially the first 3 stanzas. ive never seen you write like that before, and i thought you did it very well. well there is always the future to play whacky games with them again =] (the fourth and final smily) |
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Re: Beyond this Place
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:25:35 AM AEST
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i use to be able to play
with lil ryan,but now its not the same
i use to be able to play
all them weird whacky games
Beautifully written espeically these stanza,s they were well written and seem to make the write come alive with emotins.
Well written. |
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