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small mind
Contributed by
monophobic
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:25:41 PM in AEST
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open yourself up to things out of your norm
poems are emotions of thoughts of life, love, hate, and pain
you might think things i do, you might cut yourself just as deep
but does that make u the same as me?
two worlds apart, and thinking the same thing
hard to imagine seeing as how im not as cool as you
write a poem express your oh so rare thoughts
because i'd like to know what makes u oh so special
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monophobic
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Re: small mind
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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I guess this is an inside deal and I'm on the outside here. It's a little on the "porme" side and I hate that stuff, so I give this a 2.2 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: small mind
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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| i hate it when people write things to where its to the affect you know who you are, because its like great theyre writing about me, ahhh, heh. well this is a great write, full of anger. got to like anger. =] |
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Re: small mind
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:15:15 AM AEST
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Awesome write, with powerful words, although very judgemental, Everyone is special in their own way, even you.
Wether we are good at one thing or another or crap at most others, dosent matter, as long as you believe in yourself.
I write poems, but Im not exactly good at it, but it helps me in some way.
I guess everyone veiws the world and their surroundings in different ways.
I hope life is good to you either way you veiw it, but dont take my to words as insult for they were not intended to be read that way.
Take care |
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Re: small mind
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by gizmo2010 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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| im not really into poems like this but it doesnt mean its not a good write i just dont really like it |
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