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Assisted Suicide
Contributed by
POOBEAR
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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With much of a struggle
up the tower I climb.
Weighed down by anger,
by sorrow,
by my arsenal.
I reach the top
and quickly remove
the rifle from my pack.
Already loaded and good to go.
I find a target in the crosshairs
of the scope.
I squeeze off the first shot.
Suddenly their is total chaos
people screaming,
diving for cover.
Another shot rings out,
and another and another.
Now the police are arriving.
They call for my surrender
but I answer with another shot.
Now they are firing at me.
Just what I was waiting for.
Their bullets are real,
while mine are only blanks.
I just could not fire that
fatal shot myself.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
... [
2002-11-09 18:30:00]
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 06:40:39 PM AEST
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Oh my god this put chills
down my spine so badly
This is a very clever way
one would commit suicide
I've never even imagined
someone using the law
like that to do that final
ending to a life that one
wasn't strong enough
to do. This was very creative
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by nightrider on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 12:49:13 AM AEST
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| wow! to commit suicide by using "public defenders" is really creative. this is a really amazing poem! thanks so much for sharing it! |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by Necronomy on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 09:09:08 AM AEST
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| haha, i've thought about pulling a stunt like that before. hey, if ya wanna go out you may as well do it with some style. :) |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by lost_word on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:27:02 PM AEST
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| one of the best and most creative writes i've read yet. |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by orgygirl on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:36:05 AM AEST
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This was a very clever write! Most ways suicide is committed are much too played out. This poem also had nice imagery, I love it.
Take care
R. |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by plous on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:00:48 PM AEST
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| To good, I will vote to, You have a collection, it will take me awhile. |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by Eloise on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 06:27:43 PM AEST
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| my god... that poem was really touching... you would never think of ending it like that... |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by frozensuicide on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:29:57 PM AEST
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| this is pwetty but short. you should make it longer! hehe! i liked! |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by kegs04 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:20:42 AM AEST
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| great write, love the style and creativeness.. cant wait to see more |
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Re: Assisted Suicide
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:32:34 PM AEST
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| My comments are not needed it looks like. This is a very kewl poem. I loved the end twist! Love:::Kirby |
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