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As the Eagle Soars
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Drifting, and soaring with clouds,
wings of your soul send whispers
of freedom in the wind. Peace reigns
over the land as its guardian
keeps watch. Perfect admiratrion,
balance between earth and sky. Majestic
body brown as earth and white as clouds;
golden talons, and piercing blue eyes
inspired by independence. Honor
swells this breast as trees bow
to its grace, mountains praise
its glory, and the sun sends blessings
of tranquility upon this eagle, emblem
of opportunity. Master of the sky, keeper
of dignity and freedom. The wind beneath
your wings, where you roam, beauty,
grace, and glory follow. As the eagle soars,
visions of eternity from sunrise to sunset,
coast to coast. Drifting, and soaring with clouds.
The universe yields to your majesty.
Copyright ©
poetmarie
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2004-09-22 14:58:18]
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Re: As the Eagle Soars
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:50:34 PM AEST
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It's a good write.. kinda hard for me to read though in this paragraph form that u used...I am used to a more line by line stanza form...
Other than that... I liked it... a good patriotic poem...
~Donna~ |
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Re: As the Eagle Soars
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:12:42 PM AEST
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Powerful in the sense of pride and majesty.
A very uplifting piece! |
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Re: As the Eagle Soars
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:37:30 PM AEST
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| a beautiful pecie of writting, as though your pen were a paint brush, and the computer a canvas i like your style . . . Dorian : ) |
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