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The Definition of Irony
Contributed by
AndTheFoolShallBurn
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:10:38 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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We've smashed this wall, and the bricks barely gave, now we're lying in critical times for us both. One breath is a plea for a painless life, and the next for a quick end to a painful death. To hear your words but not know their meaning brings me to the point of slitting the worlds throat. Sometimes it gets so painful I wish they'd all die. Then I turn around and thinkg maybe other eyes exist, but none amount to the salt in my wounds. I wish you'd choke on the tears you cause, or drown in the river you've cried. Or maybe the one I've cried for you...
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Re: The Definition of Irony
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST (User
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powerful. |
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Re: The Definition of Irony
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:23:36 PM AEST (User
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I believe you could effect the reader more
if you added a few things and layed it out differently
The content has potential
to really make the reader feel |
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Re: The Definition of Irony
(User Rating: 1 ) by KarlaMarie on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:04:59 AM AEST (User
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I have to agree with the first reviewer...
Powerful stuff.
wow is all i have to say.
KarlaMarie |
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