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Why?
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why did they make you go?
Why did you have to listen?
Why does my heart hurt so?
It seems like we are always fighting someone elses' fight.
All I have to keep me warm are pictures and memories.
All I have to look forward to is the hope I'll soon see your face.
I just feel like I'm in a prison.
Trapped hoping you'll soon come to save me.
I can't help wondering if you really can.
I feel so scared and all alone It's like I'm the only one here.
Hopefully, I'll see you soon so my heart will no longer despair.
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PhantomsLDY
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2002-11-09 21:00:00]
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Re: Why?
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:40:56 AM AEST
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| aww this is a really sad poem. With a great ending! This is a wonderful write! |
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Re: Why?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 12:14:18 AM AEST
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avid and soul wrenching, i missed this when you wrote 'cause of my puter, and now i know he's coming home from your posts, tho truely it is timeless..
huggs nessa |
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Re: Why?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:15:29 PM AEST
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| Your frustration is very prominent here but the hope you carry in your heart is also here. Wonderful write!! |
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