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The Drunkin Tragedy
Contributed by
Fat_italian
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:29:23 PM in AEST
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Why did you cry when you knew just what he'd do?
Why did you let him make "love" to you?
You said you'd try and move on,
But you always say that when he's gone.
Then he's back & you cant say no,
You both get drunk, and he treats you like a ho,
So on that drunk depressed path you go.
Im afraid to say thats what I'll always see,
If so then you'll always be;
That one girl I knew, the drunkin tragedy.
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2004-09-22 18:29:23]
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Re: The Drunkin Tragedy
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:36:12 PM AEST
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Wow. Awesome write...very passionate...I'm very sorry you have to watch your friend go through that. It's rough...if you need someone to talk to, I'm here.
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Re: The Drunkin Tragedy
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by waos on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:53:17 PM AEST
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| "drunken tragedy" is a cool title |
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Re: The Drunkin Tragedy
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:16:43 PM AEST
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well your friend must make her own mistakes. if she ruins her life, her fault, her problems, and she has no right to complain because of it. life is about consequences. maybe when a few of those hit her hard she might learn, but probably not. youve tried, you can try, but it has to be something she realizes, or she will never change.
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Re: The Drunkin Tragedy
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:49:34 PM AEST
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such a hard situation written well point taken. You can only help someone that wants help and sometimes the people that care about them is not the advice they take because in a situation self-acceptance needs to come first. I will pray for serenity for her and wisdom for you to help her in anyway possible. Just remember be there no matter what thru the hurtful things and all be there when she finally takes the fall. That's inevitable in a case like this take it from one that has been there ALOT. Such a good friend she has and she will appreciate that soon hopefully. Much love all around
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