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Poison and Rain
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She sat alone in silence.
The foggy air all around.
Her only friend was solitude.
With her in this muddy mound.
It isn't different from the past,
for she always stayed this way.
No one wanted to understand her,
Till they knew of this ground she lay.
Her life was full of pain and grief.
People would tease and stare.
So she learned to lead a life like this,
With out anyone anywhere.
She drank the cold liquid fast,
Which ran hard through every vain.
Now alone in the this dark, horrid place.
In the mud, with the pouring rain.
Now everyone can see today,
On this grave, her inscripted name.
Where she will lie forever there,
Each and everyday the same.
Copyright ©
xfrozenwindx
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2004-09-22 21:02:23]
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Re: Poison and Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:08:44 PM AEST
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| dark, powerful, and heart wrenching. excellent write. |
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Re: Poison and Rain
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by monophobic on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:11:05 PM AEST
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| WOW thats about all i can say for this one. it just goes to show how u should try to reach out for everyone because u never know what someones life is like |
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Re: Poison and Rain
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by waos on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:14:54 PM AEST
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| that was good! |
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Re: Poison and Rain
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by xafflictedx on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:34:27 PM AEST
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| Absolutely amazing. I applaud you and your poem. |
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Re: Poison and Rain
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:37:37 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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