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In Your Eye
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Met you down the corner
Stabbed a knife right in your eye
Stabbed a knife right in your eye
Cut myself deeper over you
And deep and down inside I would cry
And deep and down inside I would cry cry cry
I watched the blood pour all over
It ran all over my hands
Ran all over my peach cut hands
I pushed you to the concrete
Your head exploded then
Your head exploded then
I grabbed a piece of my integrity
Shoved it deep and down inside
Shoved it so deep and down inside
Buried and beauty simplified
Smiles waken and dreamers died
Smiles waken and the dreamers died
I turned it down one notch
For it was much too loud
It was much too loud
Tore your face right off the wall
Broken glass and darkened shroud
Broken glass and darkened shroud
I tiptoed so softly then
Woke from a dream in which I lay
A dream I should once lay
I thought that you were joking
Turned out to be okay
It all turned out to be okay
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Re: In Your Eye
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:34:43 PM AEST
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| i think if you took out all the repetitions in this it would make a nice hate/anger poem. |
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