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the evil within
Contributed by
Cdubs_Gurl666
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 12:24:21 AM in AEST
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There's a place that is evil, that causes anguish and sorrow.
Makes you wish you were dead, like there's no tomorrow.
You can't escape it, you're in the epitamy of the depths of hell.
Like a solitary prison, sitting lonesome in your cell.
No one thinks that this place is truly real.
You can practically taste the blood, and all the pain you will feel.
It's more intense than anyone can withstand.
There's no one to comfort or console you, to take you by the hand.
You must stand alone, wether its winning or defeat.
The devils and demons will never retreat.
Stand your ground go down as a fighter.
Or the chains that bind you will gradually become tighter.
It's somewhere you go when you do something irreversably bad.
Mesmerized by your own actions, you'll go stark-raving mad.
They're the kind of creatures you don't need to know.
They'll torture you, and torture you until you haven't a soul.
Stay away from here that's what you must do.
Or you wind up a permanent visitor, full of anger and hatred too.
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Re: the evil within
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by Lee on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:59:56 AM AEST
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The Surreal Eel y'kow Feel says:
"This is how we overcome!"
Through Jesus Christ we are saved.
Favorite lines:
"Stand your ground go down as a fighter
Or the chains that bind you will gradually become tighter"
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