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Imagination 3
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:35:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The warmth of your body
as it touches mine
Holding you closely
oh so devine
I think I am in heaven
could it be better than this
The feelings I am getting
from each tender kiss
You touch me my darling
in all the right places
I am totally entranced
from our constant embraces
We make love to each other
just as I dreamed
Exactly as i imagined
in full detail, it seemed
How wonderful it is
to be there with you
Imagination is fantastic
doing what we do
When this comes about
how happy we will be
The two of us together
just you and me
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-23 07:35:08]
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Re: Imagination 3
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by inoc on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:43:51 AM AEST
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Another surpurb write!*!
your love for 'her' is so strong
it shows well in this BRILLIANT poem
[I really enjoyed the read]
cheers! |
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Re: Imagination 3
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:00:25 AM AEST
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A really tender write, such a vivid picture painted and with so much love too.
Beautiful poem and thankyou for sharing such an awesome and steamy write. |
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Re: Imagination 3
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:26:30 AM AEST
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o.k. imagination can only go so far. Now I need a man! Must stop reading your work, immediately. LOL
Rita |
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Re: Imagination 3
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:03:58 AM AEST
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Sounds devine.
So beautiful for her
May you both be very happy
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: Imagination 3
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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Bruce you werent kidding again were you?This is very sensual and romantic a great write once again
Michelle |
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Re: Imagination 3
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:06:09 PM AEST
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Delightfully sensual....and so tastefully done...
Hugs
Jenni |
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