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Without
Contributed by
dak
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:43:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ardent rain pounds
Baron grounds
Abandoned and lost
Traveling through time
Where did all the flowers go
Left in chard ashes
Discontent
Fickle hand of fate
Backhanded
Stinging burns left
Lacerations of flesh compares not to internal injuries
Pureed organs
Would you like sugar with that heart?
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dak
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2004-09-23 13:43:02]
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Re: Without
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:33:59 AM AEST
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| the last line of this made me smirk for somereason I like the rhyming structure you used a good fullfilling dark read good work |
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