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Moonlight's Love
Contributed by
vampy
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beneath the crescent moon
and glowing of the stars,
two lovers lock eyes, gazing,
dreamily pondering the future,
whispering sweet nothings,
and sharing Eskimo kisses.
Warmth upon her neck,
he nibbles at her shoulder
and strokes her fine, silken hair,
enraptured by her beauty,
the love-stricken man holds her,
wishing to keep his love forever.
Hand in hand,
the lovers seek constellations
and bask in the moonlight's final shine,
desperately awaiting for day to end,
only to be night again, where the young lovers
will once more admire the beauty of the moon.
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vampy
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2004-09-23 14:43:42]
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Re: Moonlight's Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:16:14 PM AEST
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There should be many more comments on this beautiful piece! Oh, how I know this feeling that you express in this perfect write... For I feel it now. Deliciously dark, a true vampire's tale, of beauty and eternal love... I commend you, Vampy. Beguilling till the very end... I loved this piece very much. Thank you for sharing. I am yearning for more... For just one taste is not enough, just one kiss will not calm the hunger inside... Truly beautiful.
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Re: Moonlight's Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:44:22 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. Short, sweet, romantic.....Mike |
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