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Much Love, Pops
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:44:20 PM in AEST
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My lips are tightly curled
Into a courteous smile
And in my clenched fists
I hold unanswered questions
You try to control my life
Live through me
I'm suffocating
I feel a stab of pain
As my lungs cave in
I'll never be like you
I'll never live like you
I don't even want to know
Why you don't try harder
Well maybe you should try harder
To be a father, instead of trying
So hard to be like me
All your efforts are ending in vain
My tears flow
Like unsung ballads of past rains
Notice me
Better yet love me
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Re: Much Love, Pops
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:34:42 PM AEST
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"Well maybe you should try harder
To be a father, instead of trying
So hard to be like me
All your efforts are ending in vain
My tears flow
Like unsung ballads of past rains
Notice me
Better yet love me" that speaks to me. excellent write.
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Re: Much Love, Pops
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:30:47 AM AEST
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| mason are you sure you don't feel this way, i would hate to see you end up like your dad. anyway this was awesome. |
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Re: Much Love, Pops
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by Strawberry on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 04:58:31 PM AEST
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| very nice. keep it up sammi jo |
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