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Sick Happy Black
Contributed by
Elayner27
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:29:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I sit and cry
All alone I lie
This bed is cold
I need someone to hold
My pillow is wet
I'm trying to forget
All that's happened.
But I'm too ruined.
My sickness can't disappear
Not without one more tear.
Soon the darkness will come
It'll come from
Deep within to sooth
And bring all the untruth.
The sick happy black
That'll give me a little slack.
Copyright ©
Elayner27
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2004-09-23 16:29:01]
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Re: Sick Happy Black
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:32:55 PM AEST
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emotional write nicely expressed
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Re: Sick Happy Black
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by Alovinmann on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:36:10 PM AEST
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| NICE!!!!! COMMENTS DO COUNT I agree. This is a wonderful write keep it up! |
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Re: Sick Happy Black
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by inoc on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:50:33 PM AEST
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I hope my comment makes you feel better
as you wrote a lovely poem
well done!
cheers! |
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Re: Sick Happy Black
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by Lee on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:44:06 PM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:
Great title!
Favorite line:
"Deep within to soothe"
Well done! |
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