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I GOTTA KNOW
Contributed by
alovinmann
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A pathetic individual acting like a winner
A debutant shaking hands snickering like a sinner
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Little man it's time to grow
I want to know
Is this reality
I need to know
Some sensability
I've got to know
if I can pass this by
I've have to know
If I should even try
I want to know
A monkey with a beret on
Sitting with a liar
Stories that you've told before
Are getting a little tired
I give a nod
Then crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Might be time to go
Tell me is this so
Is it reality
Or just a show
Of some insanity
I think I should
Get up and try
I think I should
I still wonder why
I should just know
Over there's a working girl
She's looking for some tricks
Gotta get them in the alley
Get money for a fix
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
Hearts been playing on rewind
Guess it's time to go
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2004-09-23 16:56:18]
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Re: I GOTTA KNOW
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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| excellent write. interesting style well presented. |
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Re: I GOTTA KNOW
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:16:54 PM AEST
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Excellent write. It is a shame some people have such sad lost lives. Seems they would know there is much more out there to enjoy than that.
Rita |
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Re: I GOTTA KNOW
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:07:30 PM AEST
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I've have to know
If I should even try
I want to know
I didn't understand this one little bit..maybe a typo?
or do I not get it??? The I've have to know?? |
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Re: I GOTTA KNOW
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:30:39 PM AEST
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this is excellent, it really captures the whole bar/life/lonely sceen, i had to laugh here though lol: A monkey with a beret on/Sitting with a liar creative and funny, keep 'em coming:)
hugs n' love nessa x
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