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No More Tears To Cry
Contributed by
juliette
on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I made my intentions clear from day one,
You and me were just having fun-
I wasnt feeling anything while you were holding my hand,
I knew that I could have you but you were not my man.
Then something snapped and everything changed-
And I was needing you but you were acting strange.
I told you I fell and you crumbled inside,
Because you loved me too, but why did I hide?
Ran the other way when you wanted my heart,
Finally gave it up and just look where we are-
Separate planets- whole universes apart-
Its over- just as quick as it started-
And you keep asking me just where we went wrong?
When I couldnt go anywhere without you tagging along-
And your ring on my finger like I sold you my soul-
And we never got along because I couldnt let go,
Of my pride, deep inside of me, I kept my dignity-
You took so many things and I salvaged the best of me.
The side of me that felt so much love for this man-
Who robbed me of words, silenced me with cold hands-
You bruised so much more than the side of my face,
I only took a step back and put you in your place-
Because you will love me now until the day you die,
And the hard truth is I have no more tears to cry.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2002-11-10 12:30:00]
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by OreO on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 01:28:04 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem
Nobody deserves physical
abuse in this form, i've been
in this situation more than
i care to admit, my heart
goes out to you, Thanks
for sharing this i hope
your ok.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by coolsmcniel on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:15:20 PM AEST
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| Talk about a strong woman. Very courageous. This poem gives me chills, very well written, and i appreciate all the feeling put into this. Very good poem |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:44:49 PM AEST
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Very sad,I couldnt imagine going through this!
Your stronger than I! Great poem! Straight from the heart!Christina |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by LostDream on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:51:41 AM AEST
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I really liked it...
but what a terrible experience...
I hope now you're ok.You're really strong!!
Sara |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:31:04 PM AEST
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this poem is
very emotional
but still very good
keep writing :*). |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:09:41 PM AEST
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*Stunned silence* Wow. *Ok, not the most intelligent thing to say.* This is awesome! Well, not the content, I'm very sorry this happened to you, but the poem!
Alluring, bewitching, delightful, divine, excellent, exquisite, fascinating, lovely, magnificent, marvelous, radiant, ravishing, splendid, stunning, sublime, superb, wonderful!!!!!!!! Sorry, but that's the only way to describe it!
YS |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 01:43:20 AM AEST
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Rather quite beautiful! I love it!
Always
Amy |
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Re: No More Tears To Cry
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by twobabies on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:57:55 PM AEST
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| very depressing...i should kick his behind lol...it shows true and genuine emotion. bravo MAMA bravo!!! |
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