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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
dmartel15
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everywhere I look despair
Goodness is nowhere to be found
Nothing going right
Life's a mess
People I love gone
Love for people ever so alive
What to do now
Carry on how?
I don't see the light at the end
when will this end
Why, I ask why?
Peacefulness for you was not far
Away rest my friends, and watch.
Close my eyes and no sights that please me come
Bitter-cold death is imprinted
Peace is GONE
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2004-09-23 21:43:48]
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:49:40 PM AEST
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You've mapped out your innermost feelings here and show jus how defastaing death is for us left behind. U know they are in a better place yet u long for jus one more chance to hug them.
Great writing!
luv, huggs,
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