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Tragic Love
Contributed by
veenu
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:53:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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no, you are thinking abide,
i know ,love for me ,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still,
dear i have to die;
cancer can't even touch my soul,
stop tear's they can sink the world whole;
after death i will be a star,
breath near you while i will be too much far;
when you will give me an eye,
i will give a little shy;
and i will twinkle my eyes,
in order to tell you iam survive,
i know,love for me ,
with in u cant hide,
but still...but still,
dear i have to die......................
but ,dear ,but about the solitude,
the moments without you will be rude;
always i will keep my eyes on you,
one day our dreams will come true;
you are saying true ,i know ,
but still dear, i have to go... i have to go;
on every step of you i will be your guide,
i know ,love for me,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still
dear i have to die........
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veenu
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Re: Tragic Love
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:58:39 AM AEST
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so tragic and heartfelt..I liked the mood this created
love the line "after death i will be a star"
I suppose we all are just bits of carbon..like a star..nice feel there
TY
Kelly x |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:59:49 AM AEST
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Beautifully written and with such feeling too.
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Re: Tragic Love
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by blackholesun on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:08:22 AM AEST
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| that made me cry this morning!oh god i would just die to know that my man felt that way about me and would express it like so wow!you are rather unique i liked the line,i will give a little shy;and i will twinkle in my eyes,thats talented!i hope you werent talking about suicide if you were it was twice as sad i cant imagine. |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by Dorian on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:50:05 PM AEST
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| sorry 4 your pain . . . Dorian : ( |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:46:10 PM AEST
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| excellent write. full of emotion. |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by abhay on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:09:23 AM AEST
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oh...........................i am just rocked by it is it called love true love,,,,,,,,,whatever that was great keep writing thanx for sharing it just mde my ters to fall from my eyes.................................great.........awesome excellent ................................u do a hard work
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