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Virtuous Winds
Contributed by
shanarah
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:11:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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hissing sirens he sings,
prudent melodies whispered,
blowing gently,
rendering a kiss.
Awakening refreshments
hurled in by mild days.
Twisted personality
transforms,
attatching a ferocious attitude,
clever and sharp,
transmitting foamy waves,
fracturing boughs,
tossing its message into
wide open skies.
Energy is feeble,
rest is revived,
he stabilizes comfort,
reverting boughs and waters
to dance.
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-09-24 09:11:33]
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Re: Virtuous Winds
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:18:14 AM AEST
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| What an awesome poem to reflect upon the true beauty of Nature. I am glad to have this chance to be exposed to such a gifted poet and would only hope some of you rubs off onto me. Thank You for sharing yourself and your talent with all of us. Please have a peek at some of mine and leave a message. I think you might enjoy Kiss You And Whisper. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Virtuous Winds
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by LouisaMontagu on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:25:34 AM AEST
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brilliant descriptions, well done
Louisa xx |
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Re: Virtuous Winds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:54:20 AM AEST
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I have never heard the winds described before as you have done here.
Very well done! You show imagination and creativity with this piece. |
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Re: Virtuous Winds
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:00:22 AM AEST
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Such magestic beauty unearthed in the way your poem flows capturing my mind, and creating a lasting image, thanking you for sharing such a wonderous talent.
take care always |
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Re: Virtuous Winds
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:19:06 AM AEST
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Why your poetry doesn't get 100+ reads remains a mystery...
This contains some of the most vivid and original visualizations i've yet seen, and intertwines them with depth, flair and an extensive knowledge of language and diction. The result? A gorgeous, meaningful poem, and a great write top to bottom.
Beaten savagely with a large club,
-V.S. |
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