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Love Silently Whispers
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love silently whispers into the night,
Lighting up smouldering fires so bright,
Bringing the lust back into the cold air,
Feelings of rapture are something to share.
You can hear these unspoken words,
Deep in your heart that can always be heard,
Blood begins to pump into your stolen heart,
Feeling so intoxicated you dont know where to start.
This love swirls all around the candlelit room,
Chasing away sadness, ridding you of gloom,
Filling your soul with a passion so deep,
Feelings of true love makes you want to weep.
The presence of this heavenly scent,
Leaves in your senses a rather large dent,
Love can really knock a person off their feet,
At last you know what it is to feel complete.
Warmth & togetherness dance around,
A heartbeat pounding is the only audible sound,
Worlds my collide & empires may fall,
But knowing I have love means I have it all.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-24 12:20:43]
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:39:29 PM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me
5/5 |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:57:52 PM AEST
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| I really like this one. The images are lovely and I love your description of the passions that come with love |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:07:34 PM AEST
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Brilliant. Love makes all, alright.
Nazmythian ~
Nice write Pixie |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Overstated on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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| this is a lovely effort full of imagery and passionate wording - loved the ending sounds like thoses lines should be famous... great effort :) |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Dorian on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:00:43 PM AEST
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as a painting this would be a picaso . . . Dorian : )
((((((((4 pixie))))))))) |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:23:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful and passionate, excellent poem pixie
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:12:45 PM AEST
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beautiful.. so beautiful.. wow i wish i felt like this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:14:00 AM AEST
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Ahh, what a wonderful depiction of this fragile and powerful emotion. I'm terribly glad to see this happy poem. The things you can do with love, eh?
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Love Silently Whispers
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:02:10 PM AEST
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| Great write. |
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