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Forever Broken
Contributed by
PsykoticDoll
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These memories wont quit
Sickened by what happened,
Thought I put it all to rest
But its rising out of the past.
Having to face it once more
Feel all those awful emotions,
Hearing my screams echo
Laughter ringing in my ears.
When will all of this leave
It already has a piece of me,
Wont let this have my soul
If I must I will carve it out.
Forever broken by you
Never be able to change,
Want to be put six feet under
Maybe then all this will end.
Perfect hatred for you
And even for myself,
Look what youve done
Soon Ill be forever gone.
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PsykoticDoll
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2004-09-24 13:15:36]
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Re: Forever Broken
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:38:00 PM AEST
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i know these feelings.
you've expressed them wel!
i know what you're talking about, but don't let this person win!!!!
... it's not to late...! |
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Re: Forever Broken
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:16:12 PM AEST
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| This poem is truely awesome! I like the way you vividly described your emotions about the subject. Its not a very easy subject to write about. Good luck with the future...-Ashlee aka VonDutchChick08 |
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Re: Forever Broken
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:07:09 PM AEST
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| amazing write, very emotional and powerful. you have the power to be left unaffected or let the past get to you. |
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Re: Forever Broken
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:56:14 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. |
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