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Myself, Anger Alive
Contributed by
Troubadour
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:56:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Swirling about me.
Tendrils of cloudy fire.
Rings of thick black smoke.
Alive inside me.
This i sire.
This hate i own.
Forgetting dreams.
Losing memories.
Hazily i fall.
Eyes alight.
Pure discontent.
Into the mist.
Of uncontrollable anger.
Delving deeper.
To this truth.
This my unadultered self.
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Troubadour
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2004-09-24 13:56:05]
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Re: Myself, Anger Alive
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:42:19 PM AEST
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Great work. It wasn't long at all and you got right to your point. It probably felt nice to write this...It was an awesome rant.
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Re: Myself, Anger Alive
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:59:06 PM AEST
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| very good. keep up the great work. |
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