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Bath
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Twenty two candles are lit,
Dim light plays across my face.
I am scared, more than a little bit,
To leave this world, ascend to grace.
The razor is in my hand,
The water is at my neck,
Now the water is in my hand
And the razor is at my neck.
I start to bleed, oh so freely.
My life turns the water crimson.
If only, if only they could see me,
Perhaps they might miss their son.
Not much time, I'm feeling faint,
I'll soon be just a lifeless shell.
I'll die a sinner, because I'm no saint
So I guess I'll see you in hell.
Now it all just fades to black,
So I slip under the bloody waves.
This is the final morbid tack,
Hammered into my early grave.
Copyright ©
luna_mica
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2004-09-24 21:05:49]
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Re: Bath
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:15:42 PM AEST
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Nice write. I can relate, life is cruel but one day I realized that it all still carries on, no matter what. Perhaps it's meant to be that one day things will change and we'll not see life in that perspective. I hope so, anyways. Hope you're okay.
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Re: Bath
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:20:36 PM AEST
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| Written with such pasion, and with so many vivid images and feelings, you write poetry well and seem to know how to draw the reader.......cool such talent you have awesome take care always and forever. |
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