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Contributed by
Srugglingyoungster
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:54:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As hurt as I may feel,
as deep as I may have been wounded,
I will only eventually heal.
Only become stronger,
and recover my feelings.
Only conquer the demons
given to destroy
my darkly created world
that i so ever worked hard on
to build, to keep steady, and to live on.
Copyright ©
Srugglingyoungster
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2004-09-24 21:54:41]
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by Buggsy on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:07:35 PM AEST
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| I know how difficult it is to fit writing in with school and other things such as sport, I have hardly any time at the moment. I think that this poem is really good, I really liked it; the length does not matter. -a short poem can be as good as a long one- |
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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| Awesome write portraying a struggle to fit everthing in, may you find the strength to endure all thoughout your life, take care always |
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