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The Strongest Sense
Contributed by
allu
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:15:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wanted to see you
For seeing you may strengthen my love for you
But you were not before my eyes, after a while
I wanted to hear you
For hearing you may strengthen my love for you
But you were not near my ears, after a while
I wanted to touch you
For touching you may strengthen my love for you
But you were not within my reach, after a while
I wanted to think of you
For thinking of you may strengthen my love for you
But you were not in my mind, after a while
I resorted to feel you
For feeling you does strengthen my love for you
And you will be in my heart, always
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2004-09-25 04:15:23]
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Re: The Strongest Sense
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 05:35:57 AM AEST
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| A very unique style of writing, it made it a joy to read, visual images revealing an inner passion to draw in the mind. awesome poem. |
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Re: The Strongest Sense
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:26:12 AM AEST
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Unique and fun to read. Also, meaningful as the sense of love moves from more external factors to within. It led me to think of soul mates.
A moving write, Willofree |
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