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this is my apology
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:40:07 AM in AEST
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life without you isnt all i wanted it to be
life without your sanity isnt much at all
lifes not to good when ur stuck bleeding on the floor
tried to walk out of this demise
but theres a padlock on the door
i never wanted to fall this far down
i never knew i,d never be able to return
with one touch it al began
with one cut this is the end
this is my apology
cold hearted bleeding from the wounds that have been inflicted
wounded i am indeed blinded i can not see
but i am so sorry
with a touch it began
with a blade my blood ran
today it will all end
this is my apology
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2004-09-25 07:40:07]
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Re: this is my apology
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:31:54 AM AEST
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| Awesome write with such vivid images, cheers for sharing. |
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Re: this is my apology
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:34:06 AM AEST
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i can tell that this came straight from the heart.
this poem was excellent! ... but don't give up just yet. |
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Re: this is my apology
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 10:13:50 AM AEST
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very well written poetry. nice work.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: this is my apology
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:46:56 PM AEST
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| Don't give up, there is hope. Great write. |
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