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Pain
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish this pain would go away
I wish my heart would heal
But babe the cut was way too deep
The metaphorical pain became too real
I refuse to keep going on
How can I stay strong
When the only one I ever loved
Has walked out the door and gone
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-09-25 14:31:25]
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Re: Pain
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:40:58 PM AEST
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short indeed, but so great!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Pain
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:03:15 PM AEST
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This is great... short and sweet... and o he point!!! Take care...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Pain
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by pixie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:31:28 AM AEST
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aww very sad, a short and very powerful write, touched my heart,
pixie xx |
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Re: Pain
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:17:20 PM AEST
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You expressed your hearache so well Kie.
It does get better one day at a time take it easy on yourself and keep smiling as tears get lost in the pain.
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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