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And Black
Contributed by
AliB
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:19:40 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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As she stands by the waters edge
Almost hypnotised by the moons reflection
It reminds her of just yesterday
Standing there
Motionless
Empty beer bottles by her side
Overwhelming feelings of hopelessness
Despair
And now, fire dancing in her eyes
Beckoning her forwards
Colours surround her
Oranges, reds, blues
And black
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2004-09-25 15:19:40]
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Re: And Black
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:22:12 PM AEST
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OOhhh, this is dark and ominous Ali, excellent imagery, love the title it really pulled me in.
Excellent poem, told you you could still do it
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: And Black
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:04:06 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very creative. |
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Re: And Black
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:27:09 AM AEST
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| awesome! |
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