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Souvenir Smiles For You
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:21:29 PM in AEST
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no souvenirs are left to me
no poetry I'll read enough
to know each line by heart
no faded scrapbook pictures
to bring me back
to way back when
but I'm with you there
in the corner
I'm with you in the words
we wrote and couldn't write
I'm with you in the yesterdays
and oh, my friend,
I'm there with you
in every quaint tomorrow
you told me to keep all them smiling
I'll postmark and forward
the smiles you sent me
and I'll pray that they smile
(though I don't really pray)
because you told me,
keep them smiling
and in their smiles
I'll find my souvenir.
and I'm with you there
in the corner
(and we're smiling)
I'm with you in the words
we wrote and couldn't write
(and we're smiling)
I'm with you in the yesterdays
(and how we smile there)
and oh, my friend,
I'm there with you
in every quaint tomorrow
(we smile)
and everyone you told me to
and everyone, everywhere,
all 'round the world
are all smiling
--I tried my best to get them to--
just for you.
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
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2004-09-25 16:21:29]
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:37:28 PM AEST
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Very good jus keep on smiling.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:01:09 PM AEST
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she'll love and appreciate
all those smiles of tomorrow
]cheers! |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:25:21 PM AEST
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Prayers going up and smiles from me.
Rita |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:53:57 PM AEST
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What a wonderful write to a dear friend Nora. I will Sandy as well. Thank you very much for the message you left on my "Say A Prayer" piece. I really appreciate it. *hugs*
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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| This is so nice... |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by pixie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:30:06 AM AEST
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a very sweet and thoughtful write Nora
pixie xx |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:58:41 PM AEST
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Sandy needed this encouragement, dear. I think the Lord will lead her to it. :)
Em
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:24:03 AM AEST
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| THE night that I left. I came back on to read one more poem and ended up reading this poem that you so beautifully written. IT made me do alot of thinking and soul searching. it made me feel loved. it made me feel that I have to do alot of changing . thanks my friend. GOD DID DIRECT ME TO READ IT. |
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Re: Souvenir Smiles For You
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:47:24 PM AEST
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Sometimes, hon - I know the only way to get it to come out just right is to write it. And how perfectly this came! This piece is beautiful, because the heart embedded in it is. Sandy (and every single one of us for that matter) is so very lucky to have you for a friend.
I'm so very glad to come here after Sandy did... to know that she's back, to know that she's read it... to know that it and her have made their way home.
Beautiful.
SNM
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