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Painted Smiles
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thepoet
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:13:07 PM in AEST
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Everyone sees my painted smile.
I hide my tears all the while.
Only showing people what they want to see.
Never showing the hurt in me .
You smile at me inside i cry.
I ask my self WHY OH WHY!
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Re: Painted Smiles
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:17:46 PM AEST
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oh I know what you mean
I am like that sometimes
[It's good though when you can somehow snap out of it...]
you wrote this well
thanks for submitting
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Re: Painted Smiles
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:32:20 PM AEST
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This is very introspective. I wonder if there's a name for this neurosis. I know I have suffered from it...still do at times. What is it that keeps us from being willing to just be ourselves? Very thought provoking write.
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