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I'll be free
Contributed by
SlimStaple
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:07:46 AM in AEST
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Make me happy for just one day.
Drag me out of this house I thought was brown.
Pull me by the wrist and make me leave.
Shove me in your car and drive me away.
Get me out of here.
I want to be free.
I want grass under my feet and wind in my hair.
I want to run freely through fields of flowers.
I want to be gone.
Lets burn down my house
And shoot up a store.
Then lets build a new life in the country.
Lets be wild, lets have fun.
I want to be free.
I want grass under my feet and wind in my hair.
I want to run freely through fields of flowers.
I want to be gone.
If you don't come, I'll just start walking.
I'll walk until I can't anymore.
Until my feet are bruised and bleeding.
I'll walk until I fall down dead.
I want to be free.
I want grass under my feet and wind in my hair.
I want to run freely through fields of flowers.
I want to be gone.
So when you find my body
Lying on the ground somewhere
I will have a huge grin on my face.
I'll be free, I'll have fun.
I want to be free.
I want grass under my feet and wind in my hair.
I want to run freely through fields of flowers.
I want to be gone.
Don't cry for me.
I'll be running free somewhere
With my hair flying behind me
And my shoes long forgotten.
I'll be happy, I'll be free.
I want to be free.
I want grass under my feet and wind in my hair.
I want to run freely through fields of flowers.
I want to be gone.
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Re: I'll be free
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:16:46 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem, i know how you feel when you say you feel trapped, and you express the feelings of wanting to escape so well. |
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Re: I'll be free
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:33:31 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written felt bit like a song, or an emotional ballad.....but then poem flows as such......if not able to leave or go out side....then at least our imagination an dreams surfice. Cool poem. |
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Re: I'll be free
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by veenu on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:54:09 AM AEST
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great poem like the line grass under my feet and wind in my hear............
great job keep on composing and thanks for sharing................
godbless u!
************************* naveen********* |
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Re: I'll be free
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by inoc on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:44:48 AM AEST
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yes running free
is sometimes the best way to be
love your write
cheers! |
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Re: I'll be free
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:15:43 PM AEST
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| Talentless and pointless..like duhhh instead of wasting your time writing that...try going for a walk |
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