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memories
Contributed by
aernby
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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wind across the lake,
sun bleached driftwood and pebbles,
memories on shore--
long gone days of sun bleached fun
flown away, smoke on the wind
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2002-11-11 08:00:00]
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Re: memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:57:09 AM AEST
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As you well know now
my comment probably isnt worth
much being as i dont understand
haiku poetry but i think this is a
beautiful write, it kind of says to me
that the wind carried memories of
past times up and away with it
It's really beautiful if you keep
reading it over and over, that's
what i've done. Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: memories
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by spooky on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:33:11 AM AEST
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| I do hakui poetry,,,it is touching ,,but to sad that there isn't a picture to go with it then [people would understand,, |
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