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As The World Turns
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As the world spins & turns,
People cry & love burns,
Something is always going on,
Someones always singing their song.
The world turns as we silently sleep,
Never stopping to comfort us as we weep,
No matter whats going on the world moves,
But yet it has nothing really to prove.
Its just like a merry go round,
That orbits in circles without making a sound,
Sometimes I feel quite dizzy from this ride,
But the constant movement never subsides.
People die but the world misses this,
It never sees a teenagers first ever kiss,
All the while carrying on about its day,
Nothing or no-one can stand in its way.
If the world did stop would we know?
Would we notice if it lost its flow?
Or would we miss when the world needed a hug?
Or maybe we would just carry on & shrug.
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pixie
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2004-09-26 14:00:46]
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Re: As The World Turns
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:33:25 PM AEST
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Very musing pixie. You've written a very poignant poem. This was wonderful.
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Re: As The World Turns
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:29:46 PM AEST
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ohhh, so well written, and truthful, wonderful how you so gently turned it all around, excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: As The World Turns
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:41:07 PM AEST
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this was so perfect in every way loved it. So wonderfully written and totally true. great job pixie.
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Re: As The World Turns
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:05:44 PM AEST
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| Such a wonderfully fantastic write. Awesome poem. I love it. Great write. |
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Re: As The World Turns
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by Dorian on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:17:16 PM AEST
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pixi do u remember in charles dickens xmas carol
how when each ghost guides scruge into the past u know he floats while being a spirit and can see his life passing before him, well that just happened while i read your poem, correction, your masterpeice . . . Dorian : )
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