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Shadow
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:33:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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People see right past me.
They wave at others behind my ghost person.
They only see the ghost.
They laugh at the floating silcence.
The shadow around my heart grows weaker and weaker everyday. Soon it will break and shatter my life.
Theres no one who can understand my ghost soul.
My heart my shadow heart.
The part of me that is so small.
The part of me that is so big.
The shadow around my heart grows weaker and waeker everyday. Soon it will break and and my life will shatter.
I cant be saved.
There's no one here; who can pick me up.
There's no one here; who cares about my shadow.
My life as it may seem was pointless.
The shadow is broken. Shattering my life, breaking my soul. Weaker and weaker it got until it broke shattering my life.
The shadow is gone leaving me is darkness.
Trying too plauge me is you laughs.
It can suceed now, the laughter can break me soul, my shadow soul.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-09-26 16:33:15]
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:56:51 PM AEST
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| what a sad ghostly poem. |
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Re: Shadow
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:31:55 PM AEST
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| Nice, I like it. |
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Re: Shadow
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by spyke_420 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:10:16 PM AEST
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| this is how I feel....I can't wiat to read your other work....it is soo deep and intense...I love it |
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