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Glass
Contributed by
lastwaltz
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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This too shall pass This too shall pass Staring at this piece of glass Not sharp enough Spiderweb stops me Hands are shaking Mouth is dry Want to vomit But nothing's inside I bled to let you in Must bleed to get you out
The hours... They're passing Guess I have somewhere to be
She's got all the answers He knows all there is All I see are mirrors
Break them They will cut Deep enough
No plan for this Can't stop Won't leave Going to wear my heart on my sleeve So you can tell me it doesn't exist I like the way your tongue gets caught in your mouth Your hands are shaking Your mouth is dry You don't feel good about it Until your friends arrive Then you are one and I am alone And I don't mind I still see you in me and me in you
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lastwaltz
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2004-09-26 16:34:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:33:37 PM AEST (User
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great write. |
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Re: Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:23:14 PM AEST (User
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lot of emotion great poem |
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Re: Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:20:40 PM AEST (User
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I thought the first stanza was the best out of it all, but you coherently kept to your message, and I expect it resonates with a lot of people who self-harm. |
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