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Out Cast
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm invisable to everyone.
They think I have no soul.
But they are wrong.
Everyone has a soul.
But i think not.
It is you that has no soul.
You take me and play with me like a doll.
You shake my life, put it in a blender.
I live in the out lands.
Seeing you shake my life.
Only i am there no one else.
Now you cant shake me anymore.
I lived so i can see if you would stop.
If it will all stop.
But it wouldn't it will never stop.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-09-26 16:39:56]
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Re: Out Cast
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:30:50 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Out Cast
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Out Cast
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by lastwaltz on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:55:03 PM AEST
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| Wow--very moving |
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Re: Out Cast
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:33:32 PM AEST
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I've seen your name about, and have started reading you, and I must say I thought this had penetrative depth. I have encroached on certain individuals whom have such perspectives and feelings, and although this poem is rudimentary, it is all that I can fathom of their experience and perspective...
You have crystallized it for me.
Well done & keep writing. |
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