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I dare to dream
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Small thin black coat on my back,
Lithe knife edging into the pocket,
Seams tight and smothered,
Wrapped around my throat.
Recharging metalic tune,
resounding around my ears,
deflecting away from my tissue,
bottled up into the plastic jar.
Colourful eyes hold dark shadow,
Irisis mixing with the background,
Purplitic black tints the middle,
blood crawling from the corners.
Stems rise from my shattered heart,
Only to be burned with my fire,
Ashes of earth and beings litter,
My sight as limited as yours.
Rolling eyes shoot to my head,
tiny bangles keeping them shut,
Rushing to my silent pictured sleep,
Is where i dare to dream.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-09-26 17:12:57]
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Re: I dare to dream
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by thepoet on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:55:11 PM AEST
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| very moving enjoyed it had to read it twice keep up good work . |
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Re: I dare to dream
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:45:10 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: I dare to dream
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:31:47 PM AEST
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| very deep i liked it |
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Re: I dare to dream
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:09:40 PM AEST
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| dreams ae strange aint they. i liked the desciption in this. it sets a very errie setting. |
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