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youll never understand
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:43:05 PM in AEST
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The pain thats unimaginable
The pain thats unreal
The pain thats always there
Yet so very hard to feel
The deepness is demanding
Its sharper than before
So know its understanding
Why theres so much more
With no place of wondering
Im stuck inside this hole
With nothing to do
There aint to where to go
The wounds are extraordinary
They cover up my soul
The wounds that left my indefinite
Are out of control
Taking a mystery
Out of the wonders in life
Taking the stroke
With nothing to hide
You can try to judge
By the lonely marks made
But youll never understand
The pain in everyday
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Re: youll never understand
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by nintool3369 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:16:13 AM AEST
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| very simple and easy to understand....pain is one powerful emotion....it can be more powerful than love sometimes....and drive you to do things sometimes you noemally wouldn't do...good write |
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Re: youll never understand
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:44:05 AM AEST
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| Written with so much raw emotion, It so so hard to deal with hurt, it makes you wish for another way, but using poetry as an outlet, is a special way, and you write with so much inner passion. |
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Re: youll never understand
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by lanna047 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:40:40 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem -- great expression of emotions and illustrates the struggles you're going through. |
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