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hug!me and say u never dead......
Contributed by
veenu
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:58:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a poisonous capsule being with me,
come back or it will be send to digest by me,
i know nothing will happen to me,
because a digestive enzyme called love is wandering in me,
this enzyme fight with the poisonous capsule taken by me,
love and poisonous capsule are no more after fighting within me,
now love had left me,
than for what i am living,
life is nothing for me,
as my poem come to an end my love for u never end,
may i gone forever,
do a pleasure,
while iam on the verge of end,
hug! me and say u never be dead........................
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veenu
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2004-09-27 02:58:56]
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Re: hug!me and say u never dead......
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:17:38 AM AEST
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Such a rythimic poem, interesting to read, I got quite caught up on the whole theme...hope this love virus isnt catchy.
Cool poem as always, for msuch a talent as thee. |
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