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I Remember When You Cared
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:47:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember long ago when you cared,
When you used to notice I was there,
We had so much love & much more,
But that has long walked right out the door.
All I ever asked was you to love me for me,
I tried to be everything you wanted me to be,
But I just couldnt keep the smile in your heart,
We slowly but surely ripped each other apart.
The tears steadily flow down my sad face,
They leave in my soul a deep & lonely trace,
I longed for love all through my life of pain,
Never thought Id feel like this ever again.
When you look at me do you even feel?
A multitude of things have broken our seal,
Onto our love I will always hold onto,
As after all I still really do think the world of you.
Two years is a long time for me to share love,
I never want to remove my hand from your glove,
It feels like things are stacked against you & I,
Many a time do I sit here on my own & cry.
What is happening to our once wonderful bond?
The one wed both wanted for oh so long,
You say that you still love me, but I still hurt,
I know that well both try our best to make our love work
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pixie
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2004-09-27 08:47:16]
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Re: I Remember When You Cared
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by inoc on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:01:40 AM AEST
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all the best to both of you
*a hug for every tear*
you wrote your feelings well Pixie
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Re: I Remember When You Cared
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:47:40 AM AEST
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Argh girl whats going on!?
This is great but not..
Talk to me if you wish
5/5 x |
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Re: I Remember When You Cared
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by Stitch on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:35:33 AM AEST
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Real love is a struggle to maintain. If it's worth it, you'll get there.
Stitch |
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Re: I Remember When You Cared
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:35:39 PM AEST
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| I'm in the same spot right now. Prayers and time will make it work for the best. |
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Re: I Remember When You Cared
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:01:43 AM AEST
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Oh Pixie this is heart touching and this write alone should help.
Hang tuff, my friend and be sure to take extra time with your luved one.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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