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Frostbite
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:01:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A frigid scream pierces the air
my soul coldly sparkles
lonliness pays the fare
while mocking of these miracles
A frosty breath kills the heart
with a cruel and savage taste
as i grow silent and bitter
I wait for my mind to displace
A frozen touch leaves me lonely
only quenching my sorrows
reality suffocates me
numbing all hope of tomorrow
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2004-09-27 11:01:46]
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Re: Frostbite
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by pixie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:06:53 AM AEST
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awwwwow that was so beautifully expressed and so sad, an amazing poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Frostbite
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:24:06 PM AEST
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A wonderful portrayal of loneliness.. very sad..
charlotte x_x_x |
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