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Midnight
Contributed by
SuicideParty
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My life in my hands Staring up at the sky Counting stars as they fall Quiet sobs tell a lie
Live a lie, welcome death Love your suffering, lose your breath Lost in pain on my knees Whispered prayers, murmured pleas
Hardened hearts cast a glow Frozen time, they wont know People rise, people fall Feeble stands, rulers crawl
Always just, never fair Hidden eyes, souls threadbare Hope alive, if barely shown Always mocking, shame unknown
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Re: Midnight
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:07:05 PM AEST (User
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a very sad write...it was written very well.
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Midnight
(User Rating: 1 ) by tractorbabe on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:41:07 PM AEST (User
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amazing ! extreamly well ritten!!! i love your poem. the way every thing flowed together perfeclty ur very talented keep writting |
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