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Sky Scrapers Are Not Child Friendly
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:54:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This is a new dawn,
And A new century,
Our faces twisted,
And unlisted,
Inside a sky of grey,
A cloud of superiority crushes over you,
And you realize,
This is a new world,
And it is no place for people like yourself,
Life burns quicker that the fastest flame,
Slower than the biggest sun,
And when whats done is dead and done,
We are in eternity all alone.
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Ripper_Something_Unusual
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2004-09-27 12:54:17]
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Re: Sky Scrapers Are Not Child Friendly
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:01:52 PM AEST
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Ooh very good. I like this a lot.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Sky Scrapers Are Not Child Friendly
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by pixie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:03:28 PM AEST
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a very powerful write,
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Re: Sky Scrapers Are Not Child Friendly
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:27:19 PM AEST
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| Nice. The ambiguity is refreshing; let ppl take what they want from the meaning. Well done. |
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