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Obviously Obscure
Contributed by
BONITA2689
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:13:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Cant you see Im dying
my soul is silently crying
Im trapped inside of this life of pain
I long to live again
Cant you see Im dying
my mind is slowly trying
to deliver me from this prison
this darkness in me has risen
Cant you see Im dying
my heart has been lying
telling me I was content
instead of facing this torment
Cant you see Im dying
my soul is silently crying
Im trapped inside of this life of pain
I long to live again
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2004-09-27 13:13:38]
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Re: Obviously Obscure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:13:26 PM AEST
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| excellent write =] |
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Re: Obviously Obscure
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:56:27 AM AEST
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| emotional and powerful |
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Re: Obviously Obscure
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:55:17 PM AEST
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| Hey I love this poem. I can totally relate to it and I think its great. Good write! |
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