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Sorry
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:50:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With one single tear
you could tear me apart
ripping the strings
attached to my heart
i keep my feet on the ground
but you make me fly
im so sorry
im so sorry
please dont cry
i want to take it back
everytime ii hear your voice
but times flown by
and i have no choice
please i love you
i take it back
plaese i love you
please believe that
i know ive lied
but thats the only fact
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-09-27 13:50:54]
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Re: Sorry
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:58:53 PM AEST
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I sense alot of pain your going through .
And alot of regret.very good write. |
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Re: Sorry
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 04:18:49 PM AEST
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regrets shadowed this piece flowing lovely yet sad a nice job hopefully things work out in the way you intend
Michelle |
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Re: Sorry
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:25:54 AM AEST
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I felt the pain and regret you put into this. It flowed very well and i hope you get through the tough times your in. Very good write!
Blessed be
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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