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Living is better than dying sometimes
Contributed by
emodcgirl36
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I used to say that love was bad
That nothing ever came out of it
Except sadness
Then I woke up one day and saw the light
And now I am cheerful and pleasant
My life is still unbalanced
But it's my attitude that keeps it there
My head still spins everyday
But it's my personality that gives me hope
That it will all fade away
I hope that this doesn't end
Because loving is better than dying
I'm so happy that I can be free
And not down underground all the time
Let hope bring you freedom
And hope for the people still under
Let's keep our chins up
And wake up to find another day among us
Copyright ©
emodcgirl36
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2004-09-27 15:59:43]
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Re: Living is better than dying sometimes
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:24:47 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem here...good imagery...I imagined dwarfs for some reason...maybe it was the underground thing...kinda like the Munchkins on Wizard of Oz...yeah like them...Anyway wonderful poem...I'm diggin it |
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Re: Living is better than dying sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:45:56 PM AEST
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| This was interesting and hopeful. "wake up to find another day among us" I like that phrase. Cheers! |
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