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The Light in the Fog
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 04:54:07 PM in AEST
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Light passed through the fog
with as much thought
as the uninvited....
My eyes they sting.
The time is too soon
for this...
Now, its not your fault
no matter what you say
theres no proof
of what this is...
Dont stay for the sunrise...
It burns; thats what you said
I guess you can keep talking
...and saying that
Light passes through the fog
with as much thought
as the uninvited.
My eyes they sting.
The time is too soon
for this...
these lies are fun right now...
lets keep laughing
until the dawn
until the dawn....
Dont pass that on
pass that on...
Dont ask for things...
Ask me alone....
You see what everyone
wishes they did....
Drink the blood and wish you could
and tonight you sing the sirens song of...
Light passed through the fog
with as much thought
as the uninvited.
My eyes they sting.
The time is too soon
for this...
For this....
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Re: The Light in the Fog
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by Archie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:50:33 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. What I actually mean is that I can't really understand it. |
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Re: The Light in the Fog
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:01:37 PM AEST
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| great lyrics =] |
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Re: The Light in the Fog
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:38:29 PM AEST
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I dont see the point in leaving a comment if its not to either encurage someone with complements or to help them by leaving constructive critizism. But saying that you dont understand what was written tells us less about the writing ability of the author or what you thought of it than it does about your own intellegence or lack there of.
but they are beautiful lyrics. |
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Re: The Light in the Fog
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:31:19 PM AEST
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Drink the blood and wish you could
Hyde and Gackt, maybe....
My eyes they sting.
Did you not say someone goes temporarily blind?
Anyway, this was beautiful!! Another great one!!! I love it and I love your writing, as does everyone!! I wrote a stupid poem for English class which I didn't want read, and this girl who doesn't pay much attention said "Why! Your poems are great!" which means they day I read your poem she wasn't paying attention to the fact that it wasn't my poem, but she really loved it to bring it up today!!! Your poetry is gorgeous and gives me joy to read it everytime I read it!! It always strikes this hidden emotion in me that I never know is there until I read your poetry and then the emotion shows itself, but when I finish reading your poem I can't summon it again until I think hard about your poetry or read another poem...I am dead serious....I think I shall call this "The PsycoScissors Emotion".....But, really, great poem!!! I really did love it!!!! Your poetry always makes me feel sooooo wonderful after I read it!!! I also feel any emotion you meant when you write the poems!!!! Thank you so so so so so much!!!! I love your poems and this one especially!!! All of them are so great!!! Your poems have a hidden flowing beauty that is not often found in today's poetry writing society....I do not even posess it, so I must congratulate you on that as well! I really adore your poetry!! Please, keep posting!!! I love to read your poems!!! ^_^ |
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Re: The Light in the Fog
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:33:50 PM AEST
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| Meh...Sorry..the whole Hyde and Gackt thing above was pointing out how there might be references to Moon Child, as well as some of my favorite lines in the poem!! Another great job!! Keep writing and posting, the world needs wonderful poets like you!! ^_^ |
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