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3 a.m. Without You
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's 3 a.m.;
and you're still upon my mind
Stirring feelings in my breath
Hoping it's your heart that I shall find
but without you I am flawed
and perfection seems away
I try relentlessly to find my way
But without you I'm yet to say
Emotions and meanings
and what my eyes seem to portray
My face no longer shines
For you are no longer here
I've left you like a coward
I wish to dissapear
Fading away from confusion
but we both know the illusion
Of me without you
For this thought is less than true.
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SLiM_eLviS
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2004-09-27 18:47:41]
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Re: 3 a.m. Without You
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by Stitch on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:02:28 PM AEST
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This is very interesting. I like the subtle rhyme and the interweaving of the meanings.
Very nice write.
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